I took many english classes, and I know the proper structure of comma use from that. However, knowing the correct use of commas appears to draw them out, and it creates a pause for me that is not always desired in a sentence even if it should be there.
This made me think: Perhaps the use of commas can be used better than just following the rules. (Or maybe I’m just a novice trying things out.)
The use of a comma creates a pause, and if I don’t want the pause I won’t use it. Also, I won’t just tause out a comma if it will make the comma fall out… Just rambling now.! But it’s my writing so I’ll write how I want to. That sentence is actually kinda gross without the comma, hah.!
Thank you,” I told her, “We’ll make sure to figure everything out quickly so that we don’t disrupt the gentle peace of this restaurant.”
A comma here would be undesireable. HMM. It’s almost sad how my examples aren’t even using the word and.